I've got something going I like, but I'm stuck for a rhyme. I've come up with several clever rhymes, but there too clever. Self-consciously clever. I need an organic fit.
Lift your hands to build a wall of thorn and bone
Line your stomach with iron, sharpen your teeth on stone
Bathe your tongue in acid, cover your eyes with chrome
Set your hair on fire, ----blank----
"Foam" almost works. Like the other rhyming words, its a substance. But if you ask which of these things doesn't belong: bone, stone, chrome, foam, its an easy choice.
I think it also has to be one syllable. I thought about cyclone, but it didn't sound right, and I decided its because its 2 syllables. Blows the rhythm.
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